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Please revise or review my paper with my group members’ opinions. I will attach my paper. Opinion…

Please revise or review my paper with my group members’ opinions. I will attach my paper.Opinion 1 :I really enjoyed your report. It was very informative with the business side of e -Commerce and how it has so many advantages and disadvantages that can help in today’s economy. I think if possible you should provide a graph that might show how much of an advantage it will be because often times from what I have learned when people talk about business they tend to add more graphs or any type visual aids. I’m not a business expert but I know for sure whenever we are at work and we’re talking about business visual aids often catch our attention and they’re very unforgettable. The topic was great well chosen and easy to understand what the whole proposal is all about. You have provided very clear data for your research but just also make sure that when you do right eCommerce specify the correct spelling throughout the entire paper. Lastly separate to the pages for example the table of contents and the work cited page needs to be separated accordingly and not all on the same pages as where your data and the rest of the information is. Great job Matthew keep up the good job hopefully some of my comments will help with making it better. Thank you for your feedback on my letter of proposal I did struggle a little bit because at first I was not really understanding what an analytical report was but I will definitely work on correcting and inputting on the ideas that you have shared with me on your response.
Opinion 2:I believe that your paper is off to a great start. I really like the fact that you were so bold as to put the disadvantages of online shopping as well. The only reason I say it is a bold choice is that when you are trying to convince people to side with you people rarely point out the flaws in their argument.
I would say that when you are laying out your paper I find it easier to look at when each section has its own page. When I was reading your paper, I kept getting hung up on that, especially the first portion, your letter of intent. Your signature went onto the table of contents page and it made the paper seem a little less professional. Not sure if it was the way that the document was downloaded, so this could be my fault.
I would like to see some of the data more condensed as well. You can do this by using bullet points to really accentuate what is important to you. This can be especially used in the advantages and disadvantages section of your paper.
Thanks,
Kerry
Opinion 3 :I enjoyed reading your paper. First, you have written paper in a proper format. I like the topic(Online e-commerce for business) you have chosen because of its importance in global business.
In the letter section, you have provided the information about the advantage of using the online store which helps in the global market. Moreover, “I believe that the management should provide effective training to the employees as well as appoint excellent website developers in order to develop an excellent online store”.this paragraph will clarify the recommendation from your side.
In the introduction section, you have informed us about its importance since more than two decades, the implementation of new features, the economic growth of the company through its use. Moreover, you have provided the clear data through your research. For instance, “The growth of the e-commerce is at a very fast pace and it is attracting the offline retailers as well because it gives an opportunity to reach new customers (Maliaka, 2016).”
The data section is the proof of applying online e-commerce in business. I think if you provide the graph, it will clarify better. Moreover, you have stated both the advantages and disadvantages of using it. I like the way you have provided each supporting statement through your research on each section of your paper. For instance, in the disadvantages section, “The growth of the e-commerce is at a very fast pace and it is attracting the offline retailers as well because it gives an opportunity to reach new customers (Maliaka, 2016).”
You have clearly stated the conclusion and recommend to use it despite its some disadvantages that can be ignored.
Finally, you have well written. Best of luck for your paper.

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