In-depth analysis – Denis McQuail's Mass Communication Theory

Raising the Minimum Wage and It's Impact
December 15, 2017
Describe a situation in which the actions of a larger group influenced your own actions. Discuss how the actions you took may have been different if you were not in a group situation.
December 15, 2017

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Editing?takes?a?deeper?look?at?how?information?and?ideas?are?presented.?Please?edit?this?paper,?correcti
superficial?errors?in?spelling,?grammar,?syntax,?punctuation,?and?formatting.?Please?focus?on?making?changes
that?make?this?paper?easier?to?understand,?better?organized,?and?more?suitable?for?the?audience.?Feel?free?to?add
more?contents?to?make?it?cohesive?and?rearrange?things.?Because?editing?is?an?essential?part?of?formulating?a
research?argument,?it?occurs?multiple?times?throughout?the?writing?process.
Here?are?some?instructions?and?guidelines:
??Introduction?definitely?need?to?be?improved.?It’s?currently?very?repetitive?and?confusing.?Please?make?the
thesis?clear.?Please?make?the?introduction?concise,?contextualizes?this?paper;?states?your?research?question(s);
offers?a?thesis/main?argument;?and?provides?an?outline?for?the?paper.
??The?body?of?essay?clearly?need?development?according?to?the?outline?provided?in?the?introduction?and?makes
claims?that?advances?the?paper?s?thesis/main?argument.
??Language?needs?to?be?clearer?and?avoids?vagueness.
??Paragraphs?are?not?that?cohesive.
??Conclusion?needs?to?reinforces?the?paper?s?thesis/main?argument.?It?has?to?do?more?than?just?summarizing;?it
has?to?elaborates?and?questions.
??Word?counts?for?the?final?draft?from?you?should?not?be?less?than?3,000+?words.
??Essay?needs?to?be?edited,?proofread,?and?generally?free?of?errors.?There’s?a?lot?of?grammatical?error?and?word
use,?as?well?as?punctuations.?Use?more?and?different?active?verbs.
??Risk?is?noticeable?and?exceeds?one?or?more?of?the?assignment?s?elements?in?some?way.?Please?improve?that
o?Needs?to?contains?some?surprising?element?of?analysis?or?critique.?
o?Needs?to?offers?an?unexpected?perspective.