a) approachestheoretical approaches, such as power, legitimacy, gender identity, race identity, etc, which is tied down to examples of popular culture. Think of each week weve looked at so far. Lack of structure Lack of transition between paragraphs Clear and concise introduction thesis statement followed by a road- map. Structure introduction, body (1-2 ideas per paragraph), conclusion. Does not answer the question Lack of connection between argument and evidence Overwhelmed and unbalanced paragraphs Long sentences and paragraphs Inconsistent referencing Lack of/no scholarly sources Do not indicate your name on the paper! Style Word count Transitioning between paragraphs.. Paragraphs topic sentence, theory, evidence, analysis, closing sentence which concludes the idea and foreshadows the following paragraph. Paragraphs not long and not short. Evidence scholarly journals and books. Re-read the question more than 5 times. Referencing guide to be at your side at all times. Draft your essay in bullet-point form before commencing your writing. Proof read + Double space!Hide
